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By: Quilly’s Pacific … Paradise? :: Raven’s Wordzzle #47

Quilly’s Pacific … Paradise? :: Raven’s Wordzzle #47 — Sun, 01 Feb 2009 03:08:29 +0000

[...] (Part One) (Part Two) [...]

By: Alice

Alice — Fri, 30 Jan 2009 01:22:37 +0000

Ahhhhhhhh….. to be continued!!! How can I possibly survive the wait? Do I have to wait until next Saturday? Oh wait, that’s only a couple days away as today is Thursday. Whew, maybe I can survive.

I’ve been wanting to play such a game, so will check out Wordzzle and maybe join in this weekend.

Great writing, Quilly!!!

By: Raven

Raven — Mon, 26 Jan 2009 15:36:55 +0000

Wow! I’m looking forward to Part 3. Great story…. and you managed to incorporate the words so easily too! Well done.

By: juliana

juliana — Sun, 25 Jan 2009 19:07:28 +0000

i left a comment here, did i not?
apparently i must have messed up.
what i was saying (or wanted to) is oh no, not another installment! and that means more please!
looking forward to more

By: Quilly

Quilly — Sun, 25 Jan 2009 08:47:39 +0000

Maggie, I am afraid the “when” is totally up to Mina. I thought I was writing a short story but it seems she wants a novel ….

The next installment is Saturday. It isn’t written yet, so I can’t tell you if we’re finished or not.

By: Maggie May

Maggie May — Sun, 25 Jan 2009 08:35:53 +0000

You are certainly very clever, Quilly, merging two memes into one and keeping us waiting as well for the answer. Just when will that be?

By: Quilly

Quilly — Sun, 25 Jan 2009 08:15:07 +0000

Carletta — Saturday.

Holly — sorry. Would it help if I tell you I prefer reading stories with happy endings? Well, it shouldn’t, because those arent the kind of stories I usually write ….

Jeff — you’ll get the rest next Saturday, when you’ll be back to read my Wordzzle anyway.

Andrew — then I’ll see you on Saturday, too!

By: Andrew

Andrew — Sun, 25 Jan 2009 05:43:30 +0000

ready for more.

By: Jeff B

Jeff B — Sun, 25 Jan 2009 04:50:42 +0000

Curse you woman! . . . to be continued . . .ARRRGH!!!

The writing by itself is superb, but to have blended the picture prompts in part one with the word prompts in part two is just outstanding.

Good writing leaves the reader wanting more. This definitely qualifies.

By: holly

holly — Sun, 25 Jan 2009 01:04:30 +0000

the part of me that *isn’t* a mom with a daughter LOVED this. the part of me that is…is now having troubles going to sleep.

By: Carletta

Carletta — Sun, 25 Jan 2009 00:59:33 +0000

It totally slipped my mind that today was the day so I was excited to see the rest of the story and the rest of the story is continuing…again….

Now, I’m totally looking forward to the next installation.
Great job!

By: Quilly

Quilly — Sat, 24 Jan 2009 22:15:14 +0000

Dr. John — that’s the best compliment ever! Thank you.

Betty — I’ve picked up Raven’s new Wordzzles and will begin crafting on Monday, I think. The post, of course, won’t be until Saturday.

Melli — that’s funny — I pictured Luz when I made her (only a bit older to be sure).

Akelemalu — high praise! I hope I can live up to it.

Dianne — I, uh, might have some experience with that feeling myself.

Amber — I used to hate cliffhangers. I almost never got to attend the movies two week in a row!

Rich — Thank you. Cherish. Wow!

By: Rich

Rich — Sat, 24 Jan 2009 19:16:41 +0000

This is a great story. I will cherish each week’s episode.

Rich

By: amberstar

amberstar — Sat, 24 Jan 2009 17:29:31 +0000

This is like the Saturday afternoon matinee at the movies when I was a kid. Love your story.

By: Dianne

Dianne — Sat, 24 Jan 2009 17:03:21 +0000

the sense of adventure really pulled me in – I was hoping for the cop to go away – reminded me of when I used to cut school
and I was so anxious for our heroine

it’s not easy to do the continuing stories – you’ve got a great one going