Comments on: Three Word Thursday #7

By: Quilly’s Pacific … Paradise? :: Three Word Thursday #8.

Quilly’s Pacific … Paradise? :: Three Word Thursday #8. — Thu, 02 Apr 2009 10:25:02 +0000

[...] One of this story is here: The Best Laid Plans Part Two of this story is here: [...]

By: Kat

Kat — Sat, 28 Mar 2009 11:16:06 +0000

The dark side of Author Quilly! Poor Chianti,I can so relate to her clumsy entrance. This is really good Quilly, and so is Mina and The Carosel.

By: Quilly’s Pacific … Paradise? :: Raven’s Wordzzle Challenge

Quilly’s Pacific … Paradise? :: Raven’s Wordzzle Challenge — Sat, 28 Mar 2009 10:11:38 +0000

[...] Wordzzles are little Word Puzzles gifted to us weekly by Raven at Views From Raven’s Nest. Raven presents these puzzles in the form of lists, which we must unravel and expand into a story. This week I bundled all the words together and wrote only the mega challenge, which actually began Thursday on my blog post, The Best Laid Plains. [...]

By: Alice in BC Canada

Alice in BC Canada — Fri, 27 Mar 2009 22:18:42 +0000

Hi Quilly, what awesome writing. This is a fabulous story that I very much enjoyed reading. You are a gifted writer, my friend.

By: Reba Jane Rottenweiler

Reba Jane Rottenweiler — Fri, 27 Mar 2009 22:17:15 +0000

By the way… thanks fur the pats & the yummy doggy cookie. I wooofed it right down and licked my lips.

By: Reba Jane Rottenweiler

Reba Jane Rottenweiler — Fri, 27 Mar 2009 22:15:41 +0000

Whoof, Quilly. I’m so confused, I don’t know who to bite in this story. Should I bite Chianti cuz she wanted to kill Stephan, or bite Stephan & Sherry cuz they killed Chianti? They’s all just bad people. I’m glad dogs don’t poison each other. Bark!!

By: Thom

Thom — Fri, 27 Mar 2009 21:00:29 +0000

Oh I see that’s how it is…I’ve only just begun

By: Quilly

Quilly — Fri, 27 Mar 2009 18:02:40 +0000

Shelly — stay tuned for part two and the Homicide Detective!

Thom — Since poi is slimy and gross, that would fit! And, neener, neneer,neener, I win! Now, what were we wrangling over?

By: Thom

Thom — Fri, 27 Mar 2009 17:33:12 +0000

I’m giving up on this post. I’d make her poi. If you notice the time of my comment it was late and oh well…i give up

By: Shelly

Shelly — Fri, 27 Mar 2009 17:29:17 +0000

Wow! Great story! I think you have a novel somewhere in there.

By: Quilly

Quilly — Fri, 27 Mar 2009 09:37:45 +0000

Thom — remind you to make a woman scorned sometime? What will you make her out of? Scorched cornmeal? And then introduce her to your new wife? You went home and came back married? Jet lag, indeed!

And, you almost got the point of my story. Stephan never married Chianti — and when she went away to learn to become someone he wanted her to be, he fooled around on her while she was gone and went so far as to marry that woman. So yeah, Chianti decided to kill Stephan, only she unknowingly went to Stephan’s new wife for the poison and since they were privy to her plans, they killed her first. And your second comment made good sense.

Who did you marry?

By: Thom

Thom — Fri, 27 Mar 2009 09:14:32 +0000

Okay Quilly..here’s the deal. JET LAG. No seriously. My comment relates back to your story. And I was wondering if you were sick cuz of the comments. Maybe I missed the point of the story but I thought the ex wife wanted to kill the ex husband and the new wife or girl friend was the one where the first wife bought the poison from and that’s how she recognized her but the ex hubby and the new wife poisoned her first. So that’s why i referred to both wifes to be scorned because one of them was going to do either the hubby or the wife in with the poison. And never mind if I missed the whole point or this doesn’t makes sense either. JET LAG

By: Reba Jane Rottenweiler

Reba Jane Rottenweiler — Fri, 27 Mar 2009 07:09:59 +0000

Whoof!! I bet you thought I wouldn’t make it, that I wouldn’t post a 3 Woof Thursday, but I did. There isn’t even a dog in the story. Geee, maybe I should go edit it. Bark!!

By: Quilly

Quilly — Fri, 27 Mar 2009 05:22:10 +0000

Carletta — Polona and Nessa had trouble accessing my page, too. Yesterday while I composed, the power went out. I threw a fit because I hadn’t saved and was thrilled to discover auto save had — but it filled my post with a bunch of weird code it took me ages to exorcise!

I’m glad you liked the story!

By: Carletta

Carletta — Fri, 27 Mar 2009 05:17:14 +0000

Came by twice today and your page wouldn’t load so I’m finally here.
This was a great story – I suspected when he put the glass in this pocket!
Hope you’re feeling better.