April 21 — A Poem A Day
Haiku
Five, seven, and five,
syllables seasoned with the
salt of changing time.CLA
Poetic Asides, Day 21
Prompt: write a Haiku, or a poem about Haiku
Quirky Quips & Sewing Snips
Haiku
Five, seven, and five,
syllables seasoned with the
salt of changing time.CLA
Poetic Asides, Day 21
Prompt: write a Haiku, or a poem about Haiku
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Hi Quilly. Thanks for the visit & comment. The speech & poem are now posted.
Alice in BC Canada’s last blog post..My Speech for Toastmasters
A perfect haiku haiku.
Nessa’s last blog post..A Poem a Day # 21 – Haiku
Morning Quilly!
Thank you for the visit. I like this short piece, it made me think of my Beloved.
If I may ask, who is David? You mentioned him in your comment to me.
I’m just dying to know 🙂
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I like what Nessa said — a very nice haiku haiku
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i sincerely hope this won’t be taken amiss and i’m sorry if i happen to hurt any feelings but i have to spit it out.
if you were writing a verse about haiku, fine. but haiku, this is not! not even senryu or zappai for that matter.
i have a feeling (correct me if i’m wrong) your schools have taught haiku as some sort of a syllable-counting exercise, and by doing so done a huge misjustice to the form.
haiku is NOT about 17 syllables and the vast majority of things written in 5-7-5 have nothing in common with haiku whatsoever.
juliana’s last blog post..A nod to Poetic Asides and some bragging (sorry)
oh, and by posting this mini-rant (i haven’t decided yet but might extend it a little in my blog at some later time) i have taken the lead! woo hoo!
i would rather it were a different kind of comment, though…
juliana’s last blog post..A nod to Poetic Asides and some bragging (sorry)
The salt of changing times. I like that.
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“changing time”. Sorry.
Jientje’s last blog post..Anouncing a New Photo Challenge
Alice — goody — and how did you like my poem?
Nessa — apparently not.
Annie — someone who doesn’t know David?! Shocking! 😉
Barbara — thank you.
Juliana — teach me!
Jientje — thank you!
FIve, seven, and five,
There must be something to this,
Five, seven, and five.
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