Microfiction Monday #53
Susan from Stony River, welcomes us to Microfiction Monday,
where a picture paints just 140 characters.
If you’d like to join us, stop by Susan’s, pick up the picture prompt,
compose your story in 140 character (or less), post it,
and sign in at Susan’s place, then commence in the sharing!
He demanded she marry him or be buried alive. She stood on the trap door as they sealed her in. Soon she would visit his bed with a dagger.
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The perfect crime… and an airtight alibi!
LOL! Yeah, Erik — in more ways than one! Thanks for adding a bit more humor to my punchline!
Great twists and turns in this.
Tony — she’s waiting for that final twist of the knife ….
Very clever! I’m glad he couldn’t push her around.
Kay — Amoeba said he should have known my Princess wouldn’t be passive.
That look she has, He won’t even know what hit him.
Bill — that’s the idea!
No shrinking violet here. This princess has a plan!
Loved the happy ending quilly!
Peggy — I don’t like whimpy girls, can you tell?
She’s my kind of princess! Bet she gets away clean, too. Great job.
Lisa — who would ever suspect her? After all, she’s in a tomb ….
A story from your dark side! LOL
Linda — muhahahahahaa! I don’t “do” whimpy women.
Ah, good twist!
Evalinn — thanks.
Ah, love your twist on this one, Quilly! Great one for the day! Hope you have good week!
Sylvia
Sylvia– thank you!
Take that you swine!!! :O)
Diane — uhm, me or the king?
VERY nice. I like it.
Kay, Alberta
Kay — thank you. My sweet little princess has a mean streak.
OOH, I love it!! Excellent, as always, Quilly!
Thanks, Pat. I’m glad you liked it.
Now, THIS is a princess with which I can identify! Thank goodness for those trap doors we all have in our homes…LOL.
Hope you enjoy a great week. Cheers!
Sylvia — you must not like whimpy women, either. An you know, I think I need to call a carpenter and have a couple of trap doors installed here ….
My kind of girl!!
Oh, this is excellent indeed.
Susan — yeah, my storybook girls don’t get mad, they get even. Glad you liked it.
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I love your proposal that he gave. I think she should have said “yes” with her fingers crossed. Then when the chance arose, “El Smucko” could get out of there! Do you remember that old movie? (The Duchess and the Dirtwater Fox) Mrs. Jim and I use that line a lot. 🙂
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Forgot to mention that I am not doing MFM this week.
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How soon is soon?
The minute the jerk goes to sleep1
OOh, good one! You got a lot of plot into those words. 🙂
Susannah — thank you. It took some majort thinking and wrangling to keep this at 140!
Sounds like a woman with a plan. 🙂
Wow, I love this! You were able to fit so much into just 140 characters. Great job.
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